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Spoilers for 5.14.
Dean wants.

So when I was busy freaking out over Misha's hands (mmmmmm), [livejournal.com profile] spacefragments brought up his mouth (mmmmmm). And then this happened. Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] ginnith for the read-through.


It’s all goddamn Famine’s fault. If Famine hadn’t ridden into town, turning everyone’s hunger up to eleven, Cas never would have been stuffing his face with burgers numbering in the low hundreds. If Cas had never done that, Dean would never have watched in mildly horrified fascination. And if Dean’s attention had been elsewhere, he never would have thought about what else Cas might slip between those lips of his.

So it’s all Famine’s fault, because now he can’t stop thinking about it. Can’t stop thinking about the fullness of Cas’ bottom lip and the way it would feel against his skin, the underside of his cock. The way it would slip and catch and stutter, leading to that sinfully delicious mouth, hot and wet and waiting for Dean to slide right in.

Dean can’t stop thinking of the way Cas would look, on his knees for him. Hungering for him. Want and take and have wrapped up in need and right and now.

And Dean wants, god he wants. Everything and all of it, over and over. Wants to fuck and kiss and hold, teach and touch. Feel.

Wants to feel Cas’ lips wrapped around him, twist his fingers through Cas’ hair and hang on. To wrap his own lips around Cas until Cas is the one groaning and coming and losing control, hands shaking, fingers hot against Dean’s skin, breath blowing out Dean’s name in gusts through bitten, parted, kiss-bruised lips.

Dean’s not broken; he just didn’t know what he was hungering for.
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Date: 2010-02-18 11:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rock-chick-333.livejournal.com
Dean’s not broken; he just didn’t know what he was hungering for.

Ungh, yes, perfect final line. Lovely ficlet!

I just watched that episode for the first time last night, and OMG it was a slasher's dream.

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Date: 2010-02-19 04:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
It was a delightfully slashy episode! And a nice array of stuff, from the silly/fun to the angsty.

I'm so happy you liked this, thank you!

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Date: 2010-02-18 12:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mclachlan.livejournal.com
UNF.

Dean’s not broken; he just didn’t know what he was hungering for.

Not so well-fed now, are we, Dean?

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Date: 2010-02-19 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
Poor Dean. It just took him awhile to realize those were hunger pangs he was feeling.

He should put the bottle down and go pick something else up.

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Date: 2010-02-18 01:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marynyu.livejournal.com
Unfgh!! That was... hot may not cover it, but that's the word I'm going for.

didn't know what he was hungering for OMG THAT!!!

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Date: 2010-02-19 05:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
Eee! I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

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Date: 2010-02-18 02:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ember-firedrake.livejournal.com
UNF....this is now my head!canon.

Also, how on earth did I miss Misha's haaaaaaands in that dailymisha post? O_O

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Date: 2010-02-19 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
Woot! I made head!canon! \o/

How did you miss Misha's hands?? Those are hard hands to miss. Every time I see those pictures, my brain gets derailed by his hands.

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Date: 2010-02-18 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lattimore.livejournal.com
Yessss. This just became my favorite 5.14 coda.

But really, just look how Misha's cheekbone is highlighted when biting into the burger! He seriously has a pretty everything.

Image

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Date: 2010-02-18 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sweetsyren.livejournal.com
*stares*

The way his cheeks hollow inwards just ever so slightly?

*is dead*

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From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com - Date: 2010-02-19 05:25 am (UTC) - Expand

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From: [identity profile] krystalicekitsu.livejournal.com - Date: 2010-02-19 06:43 am (UTC) - Expand

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Date: 2010-02-18 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] krystalicekitsu.livejournal.com
I- this-

Fuuuuuuuuuck....

This is hotter than some of the much more explicit stories I've read! Go get 'em Dean!

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Date: 2010-02-19 05:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you! Dean needs to go, ahem, take the bull by the horns how, as it were. ;)

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Date: 2010-02-18 05:12 pm (UTC)
ext_399538: (in bed)
From: [identity profile] bold-seer.livejournal.com
I approve! ;)

Oh, and the last line is perfect!

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Date: 2010-02-19 05:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
:D

Thank you so much!

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Date: 2010-02-18 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xarixian.livejournal.com
o:
This is god damn hot.

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Date: 2010-02-19 05:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! :D

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Date: 2010-02-18 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yoruran.livejournal.com
wooah... I'm almost lost for words.. loved it <3

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Date: 2010-02-19 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm thrilled you liked it! :)

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Date: 2010-02-18 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] assumed.livejournal.com
jumping on the "perfect closing line" bandwagon

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Date: 2010-02-19 05:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
I am positively tickled by the response to the closing line. I'm so happy you liked it. :)
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Date: 2010-02-19 05:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
Yea! Misha's mouth definitely a good thing to be inspired by, I've found.

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Date: 2010-02-18 05:32 pm (UTC)
ext_120093: (SPN Castiel by winchester84)
From: [identity profile] morganoconner.livejournal.com
*spazzy incoherent flailing*

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Date: 2010-02-19 05:48 am (UTC)

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Date: 2010-02-18 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] supernaturalcsi.livejournal.com
I love that last line!

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Date: 2010-02-18 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sycophantastic.livejournal.com
*nudge nudge* Me too! Hi there!

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Date: 2010-02-18 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sycophantastic.livejournal.com
Dean’s not broken; he just didn’t know what he was hungering for.

Epic truth right here. This is my new personal canon.

And of course we all want to read the follow up to this fic when Dean finally plucks up the courage to... heh... "sate his hunger". ;-)

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Date: 2010-02-19 05:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
\o/

when Dean finally plucks up the courage to... heh... "sate his hunger".

Hee! Now that Dean's figured out what his body was trying to tell him, it's probably only a matter of time until he acts on it. What with the whole...keeping himself "well-fed". ;)

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Date: 2010-02-18 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spacefragments.livejournal.com
AN ENABLER IS ME! *does victory dance*

this was way hot! and the fact that is was all dean fantasizing makes it even better, somehow.

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Date: 2010-02-19 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
YOUR FAULT. YOUR'S AND MISHA'S. (and misha's tongue! hi, misha's tongue.)

I'm so easily influenced.

I like making Dean fantasize about Cas things Cas. His mind's gotta be a pretty filthy place. ;) (When it's not angsty and filled with manly tears.) I'm so glad you liked it, thank you!

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Date: 2010-02-18 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sweetsyren.livejournal.com
Guh. That is all.

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Date: 2010-02-19 06:04 am (UTC)

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Date: 2010-02-18 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arabella-w.livejournal.com
*flails*

I love this coda!

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Date: 2010-02-19 06:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
Yea! That makes me happy! :D

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Date: 2010-02-18 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wolfrider89.livejournal.com
Guh. That last sentence: Yes! Holy shit, yes. Also, the whole thing: very hot. And I agree about the hand porn, btw. Yummy.

Hee, my icon is perfect for this comment. ;)

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Date: 2010-02-19 06:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
He gives excellent hand porn. Mmmhmmm.

And, seriously, guuuh his mouth.

Thank you so much! :D

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Date: 2010-02-18 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mulder200.livejournal.com
Dean’s not broken; he just didn’t know what he was hungering for.

Hell yes!

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Date: 2010-02-19 06:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
\o/

It's not that Dean's broken; he's just not always that self-aware. ;)

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Date: 2010-02-18 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aschmedai.livejournal.com
(sorry, bit I have to quote what everybody else is already quoting, too)
Dean’s not broken; he just didn’t know what he was hungering for.
*ungh* this! That's the answer to the entire episode! Yesss!

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Date: 2010-02-19 07:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
I'm thrilled you - and everybody else - like the last line. :D

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Date: 2010-02-18 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quovadimus83.livejournal.com
woah, buddy!

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Date: 2010-02-19 08:55 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2010-02-18 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quantumdoll.livejournal.com
Freakin' gorgeous. Totally lovely and delicious, and like everyone else, I adore the last line!

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Date: 2010-02-19 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much! :)

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Date: 2010-02-18 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siriusly-odd.livejournal.com
*major flail* This. THIS. Awesome

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Date: 2010-02-19 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
Yea! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

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Date: 2010-02-18 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timey-wimey-kid.livejournal.com
Dean’s not broken; he just didn’t know what he was hungering for.

I love the interpretation of this. :D

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Date: 2010-02-19 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :) It's kinda like...sometimes you don't know how hungry you are until you step into the kitchen and get that first smell of dinner cooking, y'know? Dean just didn't recognize what he was feeling.

And Famine clearly has no idea what he's talking about.

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Date: 2010-02-18 10:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r0knr0ll.livejournal.com
The last line was wonderful.

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Date: 2010-02-19 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annundriel.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much! I'm thrilled you liked it! :)
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