Supernatural Porn Battle Fic: From Thy Hand

[annundriel]

From Thy Hand. Dean/Castiel. Supernatural. R. 304 words. Prompt: awake. Dean's feeling a little over-sensitized.

A totally new fandom and pairing for me. Not terribly porny, but I think I totally nailed what I was going for. ;)

From Thy Hand

Dean’s shoulder throbs, tingling and burning and aching with every brush of t-shirt against the newly sensitive skin. Skin that used to be just another part of him, but now marks him as different, as returned, as Castiel’s.

He can feel the handprint on his skin all day, all night; a reminder of what was, what is, and what will always be.

Dean Winchester doesn’t like the thought of being owned, doesn’t care for the new weight of expectations and the constant reminder that he might owe Castiel, might owe God something.

But when Dean lies awake at night, listening to the sound of Sam’s snores in the next bed, unable to find peace enough to rest, it’s Castiel’s voice he hears in his ear as he slides his hand down his worn-cotton covered stomach, Castiel’s breath he feels ghost across his cheek. Castiel’s hand he imagines slipping inside his shorts and wrapping around his dick.

It should feel bad; it should feel wrong touching himself while his thoughts are filled with an angel of the Lord, but Dean just feels…he feels…

He feels.

He feels the way light reflects off the asphalt as he drives down the road, the way breeze slips through the trees, the way Sam gives off heat as he sits beside him in the impala.

Dean closes his eyes and focuses on the feel of Castiel’s hand on his shoulder, the way he gripped him and raised him and saved him from Hell. Focuses on the throb and the burn and the tingle of it and wants that touch again, wants Castiel on him and over him and in him. Wants Castiel.

Wants.

It’s the middle of the night and Dean is awake—hand sticky in his shorts, whole body sensitive as his shoulder—and everything feels so new.

Comments

[martyred-wings.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow, I liked this! This was way awesome!

[annundriel.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much!

[thevinegarworks.livejournal.com]

He feels the way light reflects off the asphalt as he drives down the road, the way breeze slips through the trees, the way Sam gives off heat as he sits beside him in the impala.

My favorite part. Gorgeousness!

I really liked this. Since it's a new pairing/fandom for you, I do hope to see much more follow in its wake. :D

[annundriel.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you!

This may have been the first thing I wrote, but since then I did manage 4000+. (Which was actually the first thing I posted at deancastiel. I like to do things out of order?) So I'm definitely hoping to play with them more. :)

[cordeliadelayne]

That was beautiful. Really nicely done.

[annundriel.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[lady-macbeth-13.livejournal.com]

I really liked this. Thanks for sharing.

[annundriel.livejournal.com]

I'm pleased you liked it. Thank you!

[bachlava.livejournal.com]

Amazing work! This is such a beautiful glimpse of what might have been in Dean's mind at this point, and I love the way you've brought together all his sensory associations.

[annundriel.livejournal.com]

I was very pleased with how everything came together in this one, even with it being so short. Thank you!

[dessert-first.livejournal.com]

Gorgeous!

[annundriel.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[thandie.livejournal.com]

First time in fandom, adn with this pairing you say? WELCOME THEN! ♥
This is very promising, it's short but I like a lot your writing style. And uhm, the permanent handprint will never stop being hot :)

[annundriel.livejournal.com]

Yup, first time! Though not the first thing I actually advertised outside of my LJ. If you're interested, my second try was much longer and can be found here (http://annundriel.livejournal.com/452149.html). The pairing set a new record for me length-wise, so I certainly hope to be writing more. :)

Thank you! And, yeah, that handprint? Guh!

[thandie.livejournal.com]

I'm definitively interested! I'll check that asap :) And I'll look forward to read more. ♥

[invisiblelove.livejournal.com]

Guh, this was so sensual. Awesome work <3

[annundriel.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you so much! :)

[cherazz.livejournal.com]

Now that was powerful! Very nice job! You accomplished so much in so few words. The detail really made this shine, as well as the style in which you wrote it.

I love this line a lot: "He can feel the handprint on his skin all day, all night; a reminder of what was, what is, and what will always be."

Mmmm, raise your hand if you want Castiel to touch the mark again! Hell yes \o/

*memories*

[annundriel.livejournal.com]

::raises hand:: Yes, Castiel touching that mark again would not be a bad thing at all.

Thank you so much! :D

[cherazz.livejournal.com]

My pleasure ^_^ I'm so sharing this with my sister =)