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annundriel ([personal profile] annundriel) wrote2009-08-18 12:47 pm

Poking at Fic

Working on the Shop Around the Corner-inspired NCIS fic. It's fun imagining the end of the movie with Tony and McGee in place instead of Jimmy Stewart and Margaret Sullavan.

The gist of it:

TIM: I was pretty rude.
TONY: Well. No. No, not really. I might have deserved it.
TIM: Yeah, I was. I called you bowlegged.
TONY: And I was going to go out in the street and pull up my trousers.
TIM: ...Would you pull them up now?
TONY: [leers] I'd much rather pull them down. [pulls them up; he's not bowlegged]
TIM: [jumps him]

Porn ensues.

The bowlegged conversation doesn't work (and that's not where I'm going with the fic anyway), but it amuses me. And makes me think of Dean/Jensen. I once had an idea for a Dean/Castiel Shop Around the Corner AU. Sounds crazy, I know. It totally makes sense in my head.

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